McKenna's Application

[Thomas Baker]

My only problem with this application is the following:

Natural Occlumens/Legilimens

- Occlumency and Legilimency is a precious rare gift in the Potterverse. So much so that there were only two people in the series mentioned to be able to do it - Severus Snape, and Lord Voldemort, both of whom were exceptionally talented wizards.

[Thomas Baker]

Actually upon re-read, a few more things.


- The shaman/tribe thing is a bit too far out for this particular verse, in my opinion.

- And the amount and location of the piercings seems extremely excessive for a child that is eleven years old, especially as they are considered minors in the eye of the law.