Circe Halliday -- Slytherin Application

[Thomas Baker]

A handful of things..

Pure evil coursing through her veins < This is a bit over the top. There's a line between a vindictive, downright mean character, and a character that is a cartoony sort of evil. This application's rather toward the latter, so it'd be nice if it could be altered to be a more realistic and multifaceted sort of character.

Father and son had come as one, betraying the trust is now done. Seeking that which is not theirs, their deaths will be met by true heirs. To find the truth look further in, family secrets will drop like a pin

< Also shaky on things such as prophecies. Diego is the one that sets down plot and prophecy and stuff.. and I don't think this would sit well.

[circe]

I will make the necessary changes.

Also, I really wasn't trying to alter Diego's plot at all, it's just something in her history. The pure evil comment is just something about her bloodline but she isn't evil at all. She is in fact good but was placed in Slytherin due to her mean facade.